Wednesday, November 13, 2019
How you can start writing with clarity and conviction
How you can start writing with clarity and conviction How you can start writing with clarity and conviction I am genuinely crippled by the fear of everyone finding out that Iâm an idiot. Cause I am. Iâm a real idiot. But Iâm also a junkie for lyrical turns of phrase, even though I donât really know how to use them. I mean Iâll still use them but usually at the expense of clarity.For years, insecurity made my writing aimless and obscure. I only started the process of correcting this after discovering something remarkable: you can be an idiot and a good writer. Isnât that crazy? It just takes us a couple more seconds of meditation and a pinch more self-control.Mistaking density for sophistication is a symptom of the kind of bad writing that tends to go undetected because itâs often encouraged by misleading praise.âWhat a lovely metaphor youâve used here! âA flower shackled by the maw of despair.â That sounds so cool! I mean I still donât understand how bitcoin works but Iâm probably just dumb.âWhat a striking quote! Iâm not sure what Schopenhauer has to do wi th the stock market but man, this author is well-read!ââWhat colorful vocabulary! I had to read this article with a dictionary close at hand. I donât think excessive mastication means what the author thinks it does, but boy, whatta sentence! I can empathize with the desire to rush the development of voice, but thesaurus writing isnât a shortcut, itâs a diversion â" the scenic route has to be earned. A command of the English language isnât evidenced by an itch to employ ten-dollar words nor an eagerness to boast exercises in extravagant anecdotes. A competent writer embraces brevity. Cogency is their master and the words they choose a reflection of such.Of course how you say a thing is just as important as what youâre saying, but the former should never be at odds with the latter. On the subject, a colleague of mine summated it as neatly as one could: âA strong voice shows a writer comfortable enough with the source material to take risks.âStyle should be a mark of strong ideas not a âsmokescreenâ for soft-under baked ones. Anyway, interesting thoughts donât need much dressing. Voice and clarity are only in conflict when the former is an apology for a âlack of understanding.â In other words: you donât get to play outside until youâve finished your homework.Writers reporting on subjects that they arenât well-versed in are susceptible to the kind of doubt that invariably leads to witless-cryptic-verbiage. âHow do I provide validity to a piece penned by a fraud? I know! Iâll just stuff it with phrases like âstanding disgraceâ and words like âmalapropism.ââ You donât have to ape the parlance of an academician to convey a sense of authority. The fear of coming across like a simpleton is the most obvious feature of one.Why you âshouldnât writeWriting that aims to impress is doomed to do just the opposite. Itâs much more difficult to write plainly. Itâs a skill Iâm still working on. As a literature fanboy, I canât write a check without the ghosts of my heroes sneering at my shameful stabs at elegance.It took me a long time to be at peace with the fact that if some miracle of science brought Orwell back from the dead, he might soon thereafter publish a piece titled âShooting A CW.âHemingway would give me a swirly, Sylvia Plath would go to IKEA, Virginia Woolf would file a cease and desist and Larkin would have just a hair more things to fuel certain opinions of his. Acknowledging those that have influenced you isnât the same as writing with them constantly in mind. If you write to be understood, and not simply to be marveled at this will take care of itself with some practice.Style and Substance as oneWriter and comedian Emily Winer recently made news with a piece she published for the New Yorker entitled I Got Rejected 101 times. In it, she commands the virtues of clarity and voice to work toward a shared goal. Upon reading you immediately get a sense of who the author is as well as what she is trying to convey at that particular point in time.Though Winter acknowledges the craft at work, the gears remain unseen. As an admirer of her attention to word economy both on stage and the page, I was compelled to inquire exactly how much clarity informs her process. She answered:âIâve scrapped many ideas because I couldnât find the words to make it come alive the way it is in my head. On the other hand, I donât hold onto a joke simply because itâs a good turn of phrase. This is the most cliche writing adage in the world, but you gotta kill those babies.âShe concedes: âA perfectly-constructed joke could ruin a script or essay simply because it doesnât fit tonally. Itâs important to recognize when thatâs happening and cut those puppies loose.âFat becomes the enemy of writing that aims to entertain by calling attention to itself. As Winter puts it: âYou donât see a gorgeous dress and admire its seams; you see a gorgeous dress and admire it in its entirety. Drawing attention to how itâs constructed takes away from its overall purpose.âPurpose is key. Letâs all make an effort to be more mindful in our inspection of words and their purpose. âIll-placed, overabundant, or awkwardly-worded details can weigh a story down, but when done right, itâs what gives a project its flavor and makes it memorable.â she punctuates artfully.When writing professionally or creatively, whether in the hopes of landing a job or contributing pieces for the job you already have, establish clarity as an absolute priority.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
No comments:
Post a Comment
Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.